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Ocean Child's Shell

Tue Nov 10, 2009, 8:35 PM
ABSTRACTION

I'm the new lyricist and vocalist for a band called abstraction. we meet friday. i wanna know if you guys think i should pitch the song Ocean Child's Shell. (which is about yoko ono, the wife of John Lennon, and the girlfrined of my dearest friend and severe crush who shares initials with this site. i call him Scarecrow)

tell me what you think :)


i look up, you smiling down at me,
your adorable, though my tv screen
i hear your voice day and night
playing my records, they give me might.

your talking right to me, it feels.
Your voice has the power to heel.
My Darling, you were all i needed
then you married her.

I realize i had no chance
i was to young to dance
and your untimely death
killed the notions in my head

but still, mr lennon, i love you
more then anything i know
but you belong to Yoko Ono.

I know im no intellegint
I know im no belle
so i wont be compaired
to your ocean child's shell.

I thought we had a shot
thought we had a chance
when you took my hand
boldly asked me to dance.

now i know better,
it was a tradition thing
but every time i see your face
i fight the urge to sing.

i know all about her now
i have no way to fight
so ill step back
and let her stand right.

I know im no intellegint
I know im no belle
so i wont be compaired
to your ocean child's shell.

so I can only be me
i hope to god its enough
because, compaired to you
i dont have the right stuff.

I'm alright, ill be fine.
Im not bitter or upset
i bid good luck to both of you
I thank god we met.

you came in my life for a reason
im almost shure of it
and both of you
are people i wont forget.

but I know im no intellegint
I know im no belle
so i wont be compaired
to your ocean child's shell

  • Mood: Love
  • Listening to: taylor swift
  • Reading: improv for actors
  • Watching: the office
  • Playing: cubefeild

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  • Current Residence: Chicago
  • Interests: drawing, reading, writing, photograhy
  • Favourite movie: Minority Report, Wizard of Oz, Help!
  • Favourite band or musician: Cheap Trick, The Who, The Beatles
  • Favourite genre of music: classic rock, pop,
  • Favourite artist: olafpriol on dA
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  • Favourite game: bug-the-teacher
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  • Favourite cartoon character: Phinieas
  • Personal Quote: Wicked
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Comments


:iconbeatlechurch:
Welcome to the church!
:iconschwarzerdrachen:
Thank you so much for your favorite!!

--
Goodbyes aren't forever

Hug please
:iconflashyfashionfraud:
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"In a world of darkness, warm up your heart and light up the world, and as you do shine apon others as well."
~Nikki Swan~
:iconfabala-todd:
omg omg thank you!!

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"crouching walrus hunt wandering lemon"

~I am JOHN in fabala's Beatle-Peadles~
:iconflashyfashionfraud:
ANYTIME BUDDEH!!!!

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"In a world of darkness, warm up your heart and light up the world, and as you do shine apon others as well."
~Nikki Swan~
:iconbeatlemadmavvy75:
Hey :D :D
Did you say that your birthday was tomorrow? :D :iconimhappyplz:

Sorry if I'm wrong :blush: :XD:

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Tell me where your freedom lies,
The streets are fields that never die,
Deliver me from reasons why,
You'd rather cry, I'd rather fly.


I'm Paul in Fabala's Beatle Peadles :love:
:iconfabala-todd:
yes it is! ^^ I'm turning 15! :):)

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"crouching walrus hunt wandering lemon"

~I am JOHN in fabala's Beatle-Peadles~
:iconbeatlemadmavvy75:
I'll have to draw something for you :D :D
Happy birthday :D :D :party: :dance:

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Tell me where your freedom lies,
The streets are fields that never die,
Deliver me from reasons why,
You'd rather cry, I'd rather fly.


I'm Paul in Fabala's Beatle Peadles :love:
:iconfabala-todd:
awesome!! ^^

:dance:

--
"crouching walrus hunt wandering lemon"

~I am JOHN in fabala's Beatle-Peadles~
:iconbearberrygirl:
Thanks for the re-watch. =D

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:bulletpink:A dream you dream alone is only a dream. A dream you dream together is reality.:bulletpink: John Lennon :love:

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